Wednesday, May 8, 2019
Analysis Assignment Example | Topics and Well Written Essays - 250 words
Analysis - assigning ExampleRest of the divide is built on the topic condemnation and every sentence foster builds the readers thought on the subject. Sentences are structured beautifully and cohesively. The paragraph is so tightly structured that the exclusion of even a sentence can damage the comprehension of the topic. Contrary to this paragraph 1 rather starts with a slack sentence. Reader finds it hard to get into the theme of the paragraph. This cause a jerky start and reader jumps to next sentence in order to get to the bottom of the thought process being presented. But one can only find the topic sentence in the plump line of the paragraph. Rest of the paragraph is a product of loosely knitted sentences with least or no cohesion among ideas and elements of the paragraph. Most of the sentences are structured in a complex manner which decreases the readability of the paragraph. The sentence structure irritates the reader and he finds it hard to focus on the idea being pre sented. Redundant lexicon and loose connection between ideas and sentences also cause boredom. The relentless use of punctuation further destructs the persistency of the paragraph.
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